小学生作文常犯错误分析

[lnjason888]

She knows what I am talking about. Thanks.

[concern2]

Nebbermind:

lnjason888:

您先别急，我在外面，我回去详细写给您。

English Subs:

Donch be anxious. I'm outside now. I'll provide details when I return.

:rotflmao: :rotflmao:
Naughty Nebbermind - hey, it rhymes!

[Nebbermind]

concern2:

:rotflmao: :rotflmao:
Naughty Nebbermind - hey, it rhymes!

Chinese subs if provided by Google Translate

淘气Nebbermind - 嘿，这童谣

:siao:

[Harlequin]

CloudeeDaz:

Harlequin:

....不知冥想了多久，一直到被门铃声唤醒，才忽然惊觉一大半个下午已过去了

Harlequin:

当他跑到转角处，给突然窜出来的一团黑影嚇出了一身冷汗

Aiyoh..... you made my sentence looked so lame and uncouth leh.... :oops:

Not at all... You provided a good sentence clearly indicating the difference between 捉 and 抓. Well done. :celebrate:

[Harlequin]

lovinglife:

Harlequin:

当他跑到转角处时，给突然窜出来的一团黑影嚇出了一身冷汗


All of a sudden, unexpectedly....

。。。。 被突然。。。 instead of 给突然。。

:goodpost:

Thank you for the correction.

被 is the examination correct version, teachers are marking according to strict guidelines.

给 is more 口语化 which might be rejected and lose mark.

[Harlequin]

CloudeeDaz:

lovinglife:

[quote=\"Harlequin\"]当他跑到转角处时，给突然窜出来的一团黑影嚇出了一身冷汗


All of a sudden, unexpectedly....

。。。。 被突然。。。 instead of 给突然。。

Thanks @lovinglife!
Ha! Harlequin, i knew that sentence doesn’t sound so right! :evil:
.....sorry for 马后炮ing :oops:[/quote]Heehee.... noted the correction. My Chinese standard is not the strict exam product :oops: ...guess only 亦舒 would agreed with the way I used the 「给」

PS. CloudeeDaz is always more 涼快, I like! :rahrah:

[lovinglife]

[quote=\"Harlequin

Heehee.... noted the correction. My Chinese standard is not the strict exam product :oops: ...guess only 亦舒 would agreed with the way I used the 「给」 [/quote]

hehe... 我是亦舒第一号粉丝 lol :oops:

[lnjason888]

1、终于——句尾可以有“了”&没有“了”都可以

到底——句尾必须有“了”
e.g 事情终于结束（了）。
你到底怎么了？

2、终于——不可以用在疑问句中，“``````？”
到底——可以用在疑问句中，“``````？”

3、到底还有＂毕竟＂的意思

e.g 原谅他吧，到底他还是一个孩子。

重要Vs要紧
你可以看这个网址，比我讲得详细：http://www.nciku.com/qna/entrynote?entryId=49372&dictype=zh

拼命和更加不同词性，没有可比性，但可以讲更加拼命了，在小三课本中拼命只是用力、使劲的意思。

还：我等了很久，小明还没有到。
才：我等了很久，小明才来。
却：我已经来了，小明却没有到。

从以上三句，相信能看出不同。

并：老师让大成看一看他的句子，并念给大家听。（并列但后面是句子）
和：老师让大成和小明念一念他们的句子。

利用：动词verb
用处：名词none

[Harlequin]

vinegar:

hi jason,

How to explain differences & its usage among these words?
1) 终于 vs 到底
2) 重要 vs 要紧
3) 拼命 vs 更加
4) 还 vs 却 vs 才
5) 并 vs 和
6) 利用 vs 用处

Hi, Vinegar.

I showed to dd your post, she was keen to know more too, I explained to her in a simple way as below:-


终于 finally, at last, at the end
到底 in the end, when all is said, after all

重要 Important
要紧 Urgent

拼命 do one's utmost (with one's life)
更加 even more

还
1) Still, still more, in progress (还在 还有 还好 还要）
2) pay back, return. 还书＜huan shu＞ 还钱＜huan qian＞ 还原＜huan yuan＞

才
1) talent, ability 人才 才能 才华
2) a moment ago 刚才 just now
3) use on the situation that was not as such, but now have changed. Exp: exp: 现在才来后悔已经太迟了, 听了半天才明白你在说些什么

并
1) and (join or merge, 并排 side by side, 并列 listed together), also, further more, together with or 共同; and, besides (并且)
2) combine, merge into, amalgamate, to incorporate 合并

和
1) and, with, together exp: So and So
2) blend, blend in, mix well together 和声 和唱 和睦相处 和平 和解
3) soft and warm, nice and warm 和藹可親 和谐 和善 和尚(monk) 风和日丽 暖和
4) Japan, the Japanese 大和民族, 和牛, 和服, 昭和 (Showa)
5) draw or even score, no winner due to equal score 打和
6) addition, + (in Maths)

利用 Make used of, to use, exploit (利:sharp, benefit, advantage, favorable)
用处 usefulness


Hope this helps.

[lnjason888]