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[Usepaper]

命题作文： 这件事让我更了解我的朋友

[Sctc]

chenlaoshi:

Sctc:

@chenlaoshi
Do you mind sharing with us the rubies for 表达too? Do you mean the marks for 表达will not be affected by the story content at all?

Hi Sctc,

As the original document is actually classified as 'Restricted' (which is why I cropped out part of it ), I have translated the points (apologies for the English standard). The many criteria taken into consideration are still quite visible though.

The marks for 表达 is not completely independent/irregardless of the story content but the focus is on the structure of story & paragraphing (i.e. won't be penalized again for plot/storyline)
https://i.postimg.cc/fRhNV8gr/rubricss.jpg\">

@ chenlaoshi
Thanks you so much for sharing! :thankyou:

[janet88]

after today's exam, it's time to celebrate the end of PSLE :rahrah:

[hazeline]

Is it 朋友? My boy told me that it's 这件事让我从新认识了他. So he didn't write a friend.

Usepaper:

命题作文： 这件事让我更了解我的朋友

[Estéema]

janet88:

after today's exam, it's time to celebrate the end of PSLE :rahrah:

Sky just reminded me yday some kids taking HCL still hv one more day before everything ends. Guess we were watching all the anxieties & excitement & forget this batch of students. 加油 HCL students!

[Dawn123]

Kyee:

aSecStudentFrom2019:

The picture actually showed the boy holding the exact same wallet the girl had lost. And when the girl dropped the wallet, the boy was just right behind.

That is why I wonder if his is considered out of point. I do not have a clue how far off is considered out of point.

My son also made the same mistake.
He also think that the boy with a wallet in his hand is queuing to buy food only.
He didn't think that the boy is holding the girl's wallet.

[Kyee]

Sctc:

chenlaoshi:

[quote=\"Sctc\"]
@chenlaoshi
Do you mind sharing with us the rubies for 表达too? Do you mean the marks for 表达will not be affected by the story content at all?

Hi Sctc,

As the original document is actually classified as 'Restricted' (which is why I cropped out part of it ), I have translated the points (apologies for the English standard). The many criteria taken into consideration are still quite visible though.

The marks for 表达 is not completely independent/irregardless of the story content but the focus is on the structure of story & paragraphing (i.e. won't be penalized again for plot/storyline)
https://i.postimg.cc/fRhNV8gr/rubricss.jpg\">

@ chenlaoshi
Thanks you so much for sharing! :thankyou:[/quote]Thank you for taking the trouble to translate and share with us @chenlaoshi.

[passioninlearning]

Congratulations to all parents on the last day of PSLE.


Please take some time to read my post on used resources and feel free to share.


https://passioninlearning.wordpress.com/2017/10/04/used-resources/

[Kyee]

Dawn123:

Kyee:

[quote=\"aSecStudentFrom2019\"]The picture actually showed the boy holding the exact same wallet the girl had lost. And when the girl dropped the wallet, the boy was just right behind.

That is why I wonder if his is considered out of point. I do not have a clue how far off is considered out of point.

My son also made the same mistake.
He also think that the boy with a wallet in his hand is queuing to buy food only.
He didn't think that the boy is holding the girl's wallet.
[/quote]They probably may not be the only 2 kids who thought so because according to him, there was no 'bubble' (that indicate the boy's thoughts about the wallet in the pics) nor any expressions or gestures that indicate that he was about to ask her something about the wallet. But I told him, the characters are there not for no reasons. I think he thought he was writing English composition which allow much more freedom in expression and creativity. Well, we will never know, perhaps they can recover from their grammer and structure like what @chenlaoshi and a few other parents have shared. As long as not out of point, 还有得救， 应该不会太惨吧！ ：）。

[Dawn123]

I bet they may not be the only 2 kids who thought so because according to him, there was no 'bubble' (that indicate the boy's thoughts about the wallet in the pics) nor any expressions or gestures that indicate that he was about to ask her something about the wallet. But I told him, the characters are there not for no reasons. I think he thought he was writing English composition which allow much more freedom in expression and creativity. Well, we will never know, perhaps they can recover from their grammer and structure like what @chenlaoshi and a few other parents have shared. As long as not out of point, 还有得救， 应该不会太惨吧！ ：）。[/quote]


Yes, agree.
Finally last subject tomorrow ... :rahrah: :rahrah: