All About English Composition
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atutor2001:
Sadly, those who are used to memorise model compositions for exams may be disappointed to find that they can't use them at the secondary school level even ...and of course in GP lah.
Ya, ya, ya you are right. One of my kids very good in compo writing but faces big problem in GP - too much unnecessary descriptions (they no one novel liau)Chenonceau:
This seems to be advice for expository writing. For creative writing, the techniques are different. PSLE tests creative writing. JC level GP tests expository writing. -
csc:
Not true lah. This particular kid is born with language talent. Since young can write well - never follow model compo. No need to learn grammar but just by \"sound\" alone, the sentences always grammatically correct one. In fact, it was my eldest kid who was weak in language; was forced to memorise compo by my DH but turn out to do very well for GP subsequently. Maybe this kind of kid got carried away while writing, forgetting that it was a GP essay.
Sadly, those who are used to memorise model compositions for exams may be disappointed to find that they can't use them at the secondary school level even ...and of course in GP lah. -
I guess my approach is quite different from most parents in that I don’t encourage my daughter to read story books. From the time she was in P3 or 4, I limit her to reading just 1 story book a week. That’s because I have quite some concern over the content of some of the books, and it’s too tiring to be auditing everything she read. As for the books she read in primary school, most of them were classics by authors like the Bronte sisters, Adeline Yen-Ma, historical fiction and some of our literature texts like Animal Farm and To Kill a Mockingbird. She had re-read some of these at different ages and it’s interesting to see how she can look at the same situation with a different perspectives. For example, we read To Kill a Mockingbird as literature, but she had to review it last semester as part of Amerian History.
But we exposed her to lots of non-fiction in diverse areas, mainly areas we are interested in. She started reading the Bible, newspaper and magazines since preschool. First with Readers’ Digest when she was around 4, then The New Paper in K1. She was reading The Straits Times, National Geographic, Newsweek and Time magazine at the start of P1. From then on, she was reading what we read - from books on astronomy and military history to law reports, prospectus and financial reports. We’ll discuss what she read with her, and it takes much less effort to do so when that falls within our area of expertise. She started reading IPO prospectus and analyst reports in P3 when we got her involved in managing her investment portfolios. She also developed her interest in other areas eg animals and the environment, on her own.
But for books she read, I do discuss it with her in some depth. For example, she read her first original Shakespeare’s work at the end of P1. This was in preparation of a costume party where she chose to dress up as a fairy princess. I got her "A Midsummer’s Night Dream" as that’s the only story I could think of with fairies. At the end of it, she created a princess out of the characters in the book (the fairy king and fairy queen) and wrote something about this fictitious character to introduce herself. We also discussed certain parts of the play eg the relationship between the king and queen. I’ve also got her to do character study of the books she read. She’ll write what she feel from the point of view of 1 of the character and later, another character, but both over the same situation. This way, she learn to look at a situation from different perspectives. She started writing her own plays in P2/3 and got friends together to perform in school and church.
From upper primary onwards, I started moving her towards writing expository essay despite the discouragement from all her teachers. I feel that expository writing is a life skill, beyond PSLE and O levels. Even a friend, who’s an English HOD in a secondary school, agree with me that their approach (teaching narrative or descriptive essays) is very short term, which doesn’t prepare them for life beyond secondary school. -
rosemummy:
:goodpost:IBut we exposed her to lots of non-fiction in diverse areas, mainly areas we are interested in. She started reading the Bible, newspaper and magazines since preschool. First with Readers' Digest when she was around 4, then The New Paper in K1. She was reading The Straits Times, National Geographic, Newsweek and Time magazine at the start of P1. From then on, she was reading what we read - from books on astronomy and military history to law reports, prospectus and financial reports. We'll discuss what she read with her, and it takes much less effort to do so when that falls within our area of expertise. She started reading IPO prospectus and analyst reports in P3 when we got her involved in managing her investment portfolios. She also developed her interest in other areas eg animals and the environment, on her own.
From upper primary onwards, I started moving her towards writing expository essay despite the discouragement from all her teachers. I feel that expository writing is a life skill, beyond PSLE and O levels. Even a friend, who's an English HOD in a secondary school, agree with me that their approach (teaching narrative or descriptive essays) is very short term, which doesn't prepare them for life beyond secondary school.
I learnt a thing or 2 from your post. I will pick up your idea on the IPO and prospectus.
I scrambled to teach expository writing to The Daughter in Sec 2 to cope with a project report she had to write. Kids who do research projects in secondary school MUST pick up expository writing. Funny though, the school doesn't explicitly teach it.
With Little Boy, I decided to do it early. I am currently drawing Little Boy's attention to a range of magazines Time, Newsweek, National Geographic, Discovery, Wildlife... precisely because the schools don't focus on expository writing. It won't help the marks at PSLE but is an important life skill.
I'm also getting him to develop in writing, logical argumentation to justify and build a case for what he wants. Good expository writing skills develop clarity of thought and promotes logical thinking.
If you can label something, you can think about it. If you can write out a line of thinking, you can also think about it. Expository writing helps you think well. Thinking clearly is important in many jobs. -
buds:
Awwwwwwwwww Buds-ies!
:goodpost: you two! :celebrate:
Nice to read the above from two of my favourite contributors here.
I highlighted the ones i totally agree with in the above quotes.
I have seen both sides of that coin. :love:
Parents are often sandwiched between going for either the passion or the
requirement first as different children take to different things at varying
pace. While it is true that children who enjoy reading for leisure may
enjoy reading for the love of it and children who have passion for writing
will take pride in the stuff they write... there are some children who
cannot find this passion in them soon enough to be deemed to have well
in school or English composition writing in this case...
So, since time wait for no man.. and SG education waits for no student,
we should not subject the child to failure *choi* and begin this dislike for
writing in the name of passion... in this case going for passion (for the
love of it) first will come as a hindrance to advancement and i dare say
even getting to know it better... what more to love it.
Heck, they may even speak really well too... but somehow does not seem
to translate into writing either. I second the thought on mindless copying
which will eventually be ineffective and tiresome to see thru.. it only adds
to the bane of the writing process for children who already dislike writing.
For some children, they write well enough but not interesting enough. But
they do read books of all genre..
Since no two children are alike.. no one-trick-pony can do the job to cater
to all needs of a writitng child. We play as we go along (work according to
their abilities and learning styles) and yes 'hope\" that with confidence
built via some memorization work either phrases or model compo, the
passion decides to sink in at some point of time.
And ummmm... that is some avatar... -
ChenonceauChenonceau:
Kudos to you rosemummy and Chenonceau for your far-sightedness :salute: :salute:
:goodpost:rosemummy:
From upper primary onwards, I started moving her towards writing expository essay despite the discouragement from all her teachers. I feel that expository writing is a life skill, beyond PSLE and O levels. Even a friend, who's an English HOD in a secondary school, agree with me that their approach (teaching narrative or descriptive essays) is very short term, which doesn't prepare them for life beyond secondary school.
I learnt a thing or 2 from your post. I will pick up your idea on the IPO and prospectus.
I scrambled to teach expository writing to The Daughter in Sec 2 to cope with a project report she had to write. Kids who do research projects in secondary school MUST pick up expository writing. Funny though, the school doesn't explicitly teach it.
... precisely because the schools don't focus on expository writing. It won't help the marks at PSLE but is an important life skill.
I'm also getting him to develop in writing, logical argumentation to justify and build a case for what he wants. Good expository writing skills develop clarity of thought and promotes logical thinking.
If you can label something, you can think about it. If you can write out a line of thinking, you can also think about it. Expository writing helps you think well. Thinking clearly is important in many jobs.
May be :offtopic: here, but just like to share my experience about the importance of expository writing.
Most schs tend to focus on narrative and descriptive essays when gearing their pupils for the 'O' Levels because in their eyes, \"its easier to score.\"
Apart from the merits/rationale mentioned above about this genre of writing, what they don't realize (or maybe they don't want to face it) is that many of these pupils have a difficult time transitioning from narrative/descriptive to expository writing once they enter JC. This was statistically proven when the P displayed the GP results of our girls' from a particular JC after their year 1 during one of the meetings.
When I took charge of the Scheme of Work for the Sec 4s in the school that I was teaching in previously, I revamped the whole SOW and made it GP style. I had to deal with the teachers' grouses, except for one, who had taught in a JC before and thus saw thru my intention. I encountered resistance from my pupils initially as well. But I always consoled them that it was good to have an array of selection to choose from, akin to a buffet spread, rather than confine to 2 or 3 titles. In the end, they can choose a title that they are most comfortable with, be it narrative, descriptive or expository. The point was to get them exposed to current affairs and articulating their arguments/discussion coherently and logically. In the end, they enjoyed the various topics covered like Feminism, Discrimination etc ... because they realized that they actually could relate to them and they had loads to say too.
This 'labour' of mine only bore fruition the first year in their JC when some of them smsed me during Teacher's Day and also thanked me for providing them with the 'training' in expository essay writing. -
autumnbronze:
That was a decisive and bold initiative. There should be more like you, clairvoyant enough to educate beyond exams and bold enough to do so.
Kudos to you rosemummy and Chenonceau for your far-sightedness :salute: :salute:
May be :offtopic: here, but just like to share my experience about the importance of expository writing.
Apart from the merits/rationale mentioned above about this genre of writing, what they don't realize (or maybe they don't want to face it) is that many of these pupils have a difficult time transitioning from narrative/descriptive to expository writing once they enter JC. This was statistically proven when the P displayed the GP results of our girls' from a particular JC after their year 1 during one of the meetings.
When I took charge of the Scheme of Work for the Sec 4s in the school that I was teaching in previously, I revamped the whole SOW and made it GP style. I had to deal with the teachers' grouses, except for one, who had taught in a JC before and thus saw thru my intention. I encountered resistance from my pupils initially as well. But I always consoled them that it was good to have an array of selection to choose from, akin to a buffet spread, rather than confine to 2 or 3 titles. In the end, they can choose a title that they are most comfortable with, be it narrative, descriptive or expository. The point was to get them exposed to current affairs and articulating their arguments/discussion coherently and logically. In the end, they enjoyed the various topics covered like Feminism, Discrimination etc ... because they realized that they actually could relate to them and they had loads to say too.
This 'labour' of mine only bore fruition the first year in their JC when some of them smsed me during Teacher's Day and also thanked me for providing them with the 'training' in expository essay writing.
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Agree! :celebrate:
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autumnbronze:
Teachers like you are quite rare. Most just focus on narrative and descriptive as those are easier to score. But such writing skills is not useful to the child as they progresses. Your students are really lucky to have you teach them.Kudos to you rosemummy and Chenonceau for your far-sightedness :salute: :salute:
May be :offtopic: here, but just like to share my experience about the importance of expository writing.
Most schs tend to focus on narrative and descriptive essays when gearing their pupils for the 'O' Levels because in their eyes, \"its easier to score.\"
Apart from the merits/rationale mentioned above about this genre of writing, what they don't realize (or maybe they don't want to face it) is that many of these pupils have a difficult time transitioning from narrative/descriptive to expository writing once they enter JC. This was statistically proven when the P displayed the GP results of our girls' from a particular JC after their year 1 during one of the meetings.
When I took charge of the Scheme of Work for the Sec 4s in the school that I was teaching in previously, I revamped the whole SOW and made it GP style. I had to deal with the teachers' grouses, except for one, who had taught in a JC before and thus saw thru my intention. I encountered resistance from my pupils initially as well. But I always consoled them that it was good to have an array of selection to choose from, akin to a buffet spread, rather than confine to 2 or 3 titles. In the end, they can choose a title that they are most comfortable with, be it narrative, descriptive or expository. The point was to get them exposed to current affairs and articulating their arguments/discussion coherently and logically. In the end, they enjoyed the various topics covered like Feminism, Discrimination etc ... because they realized that they actually could relate to them and they had loads to say too.
This 'labour' of mine only bore fruition the first year in their JC when some of them smsed me during Teacher's Day and also thanked me for providing them with the 'training' in expository essay writing.
Unfortunately, the Singapore system, even at JC level, don't teach the students important skills like how to write properly and frame their argument logically. By writing properly I mean things like how to quote (incl using ellipses to shorten a quotation), paraphrase and avoid plagiarising etc, which are essential for any academic writing. I figured that out on my own only in my final year in university. I like the way they teach logic and writing systematically in the US system. -
Chenonceau:
Hi Chenonceau,
:goodpost:rosemummy:
IBut we exposed her to lots of non-fiction in diverse areas, mainly areas we are interested in. She started reading the Bible, newspaper and magazines since preschool. First with Readers' Digest when she was around 4, then The New Paper in K1. She was reading The Straits Times, National Geographic, Newsweek and Time magazine at the start of P1. From then on, she was reading what we read - from books on astronomy and military history to law reports, prospectus and financial reports. We'll discuss what she read with her, and it takes much less effort to do so when that falls within our area of expertise. She started reading IPO prospectus and analyst reports in P3 when we got her involved in managing her investment portfolios. She also developed her interest in other areas eg animals and the environment, on her own.
From upper primary onwards, I started moving her towards writing expository essay despite the discouragement from all her teachers. I feel that expository writing is a life skill, beyond PSLE and O levels. Even a friend, who's an English HOD in a secondary school, agree with me that their approach (teaching narrative or descriptive essays) is very short term, which doesn't prepare them for life beyond secondary school.
With Little Boy, I decided to do it early. I am currently drawing Little Boy's attention to a range of magazines Time, Newsweek, National Geographic, Discovery, Wildlife... precisely because the schools don't focus on expository writing. It won't help the marks at PSLE but is an important life skill.
Give BBC Knowledge a chance if you have not tried it. I'm gonna try tangling BBC History to see if they would take to History. (Horrible Histories doesn't work for them.)
I read about Diogenes and Wise Guy from another parenting forum and my kids are drawn to them as they are in picture book format. We are hoping to go a little deeper than the picture books. Could you please recommend some simple books on Philosophy?
And many thanks for the advice. I am still trying to digest them at the moment, but I can see a lot of truth in the first email.
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