thank you skyed and i1k for the reply.
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i1k:

The level of maturity and thought placed in the content and the level of technical refinement such kideas are expressed with. I learnt the hard way the use of florid vocabulary does not a great essay make. Instead, used in a manner that is not thematic is anathema towards the end of clear succint expression in a fluent manner. That said, obviously having both vocabulary and the ability to use it properly to enhance meaning and immersion for the reader would be optimal.

[/quote]wait i1k, i dont get what you are trying to say.. can you try to make your explanation simpler?

which one do you think the O levels’ english essay markers will put into consideration? more beautiful vocabs or the content?