小学生作文常犯错误分析

[lovinglife]

Harlequin:

当他跑到转角处时，给突然窜出来的一团黑影嚇出了一身冷汗


All of a sudden, unexpectedly....

。。。。 被突然。。。 instead of 给突然。。

[CloudeeDaz]

lovinglife:

Harlequin:

当他跑到转角处时，给突然窜出来的一团黑影嚇出了一身冷汗


All of a sudden, unexpectedly....

。。。。 被突然。。。 instead of 给突然。。

Thanks @lovinglife!
Ha! Harlequin, i knew that sentence doesn’t sound so right! :evil:
.....sorry for 马后炮ing :oops:

[lnjason888]

vinegar:

hi jason,

How to explain differences & its usage among these words?
1) 终于 vs 到底
2) 重要 vs 要紧
3) 拼命 vs 更加
4) 还 vs 却 vs 才
5) 并 vs 和
6) 利用 vs 用处

您先别急，我在外面，我回去详细写给您。

[Nebbermind]

lnjason888:

您先别急，我在外面，我回去详细写给您。

English Subs:

Donch be anxious. I'm outside now. I'll provide details when I return.

[lnjason888]

Thank you,

[lnjason888]

She knows what I am talking about. Thanks.

[concern2]

Nebbermind:

lnjason888:

您先别急，我在外面，我回去详细写给您。

English Subs:

Donch be anxious. I'm outside now. I'll provide details when I return.

:rotflmao: :rotflmao:
Naughty Nebbermind - hey, it rhymes!

[Nebbermind]

concern2:

:rotflmao: :rotflmao:
Naughty Nebbermind - hey, it rhymes!

Chinese subs if provided by Google Translate

淘气Nebbermind - 嘿，这童谣

:siao:

[Harlequin]

CloudeeDaz:

Harlequin:

....不知冥想了多久，一直到被门铃声唤醒，才忽然惊觉一大半个下午已过去了

Harlequin:

当他跑到转角处，给突然窜出来的一团黑影嚇出了一身冷汗

Aiyoh..... you made my sentence looked so lame and uncouth leh.... :oops:

Not at all... You provided a good sentence clearly indicating the difference between 捉 and 抓. Well done. :celebrate:

[Harlequin]

lovinglife:

Harlequin:

当他跑到转角处时，给突然窜出来的一团黑影嚇出了一身冷汗


All of a sudden, unexpectedly....

。。。。 被突然。。。 instead of 给突然。。

:goodpost:

Thank you for the correction.

被 is the examination correct version, teachers are marking according to strict guidelines.

给 is more 口语化 which might be rejected and lose mark.