EN:Her diary is a burst of colour and happiness. Sorry can't share. Since it was her first day writing, her name, her school, all her good friends names were inside. She's willing to share to the little brother too who was awed and inspired by it. (Opppsssyyy, the competition thingy will start soon).YUP! Understooded! :salute:Those i uploaded here, i made sure there were none of those \"clues\". Hehee... [quote] Well, it is kind of a long sentence to correct... unless if you dun mind erasing it and re-doing all over again... .[/quote][quote]They write without supervision while I'm at work. I think it's a joy killer, if a writer full of emotion writes the second time round. It would never be the same as in the first one. (DS was writing how his water bottle was stolen twice in school). [/quote]I agree!Especially for writing something as personal as one's own diary.. But for DD2, she's all for erasing the lines and redoing it till she gets it neat and right. Funny hor! :lol:So that's why i started the entry as...\"depending on a child's character...\"[quote]When the kiddies were younger and we used to have those magnetic letters on the fridge, i wud have word of the day games with them..... [/quote][quote]Tried before but died down. Even if I use \"chem\" words on my everyday conversation, it goes into one ear and out the next. [/quote]Ours died down too only now. Guess older variations are now needed. :lol:[quote]I am hoping that when they read my comment, the \"chim\" vocab, I'll use pretty colour pen to grab their attention. My dd draw around a word with coloured pen to show how much she loves her best friend. So, I am taking some ideas from her.[/quote]Great idea! I'll do that too!We learn something new everyday yeah!And we definitely learn and grow with our children as well... :celebrate:[quote]One question:Would you want someone to feedback on your diary.. Hee.. But however, it could work if instead of working it like a seemingly commentary feedback..... it can also be done in a manner that you are actually commenting on his entry that day... Say... *\"Dear son, your entry today reminds me of my days when i had to......\" \"Thanks for reigniting my happy childhood memories...\" \"Know that i love you more today than yesterday...\" [/quote][quote]Good that you point that out. DS was disappointed that there is no feedback from me. I was hesitant/ dont know to write comment or correct the grammar/spelling error. So, I'll proceed to writte commentary for him. But for dd, she is a big girl. Might not be appropriate at all. Thanks for pointing it out loud and clear.[/quote]Loud arh? :oops: