小学生作文常犯错误分析

[Harlequin]

lnjason888:

知之者不如好之者，好之者不如乐之者

:goodpost:

正乃学者之风范 :salute:

愿者付诸行，天下无难亊
学者付诸意，世间珍惜情。

赠师一首以慰。 :celebrate:

[SAHM_TAN]

lnjason888:

SAHM_TAN:

May I know is there a difference between


姐姐一边写字，一边吃水果。

And

姐姐一边吃水果，一边写字。

Thanks

没有区别，只不过第一句强调写字，第二向强调吃水果

Thought of another question. Please help. If the difference is about the emphasis, when should I use the first sentence to focus on writing and when to use the 2nd line to focus on fruit?

My question like very silly but curious to know.

Thank you

[Nebbermind]

I guess if the rest of the compo has little or nothing to do with eating the apple, then you use the 1st sentence. The 2nd part of the sentence is probably not necessary but it adds 3D effect to the scene.


OK, this is just my humble opinion

[lnjason888]

Harlequin:

lnjason888:

知之者不如好之者，好之者不如乐之者

:goodpost:

正乃学者之风范 :salute:

愿者付诸行，天下无难亊
学者付诸意，世间珍惜情。

赠师一首以慰。 :celebrate:

谢啦！

[lnjason888]

SAHM_TAN:

lnjason888:

[quote=\"SAHM_TAN\"]May I know is there a difference between


姐姐一边写字，一边吃水果。

And

姐姐一边吃水果，一边写字。

Thanks

没有区别，只不过第一句强调写字，第二向强调吃水果

Thought of another question. Please help. If the difference is about the emphasis, when should I use the first sentence to focus on writing and when to use the 2nd line to focus on fruit?

My question like very silly but curious to know.

Thank you[/quote]当你希望他\\她专心写字而发出不满可用第一句，重音放在吃水果。

[SAHM_TAN]

Hi,


Just to clarify again to make sure I understand. If I’m unhappy that 姐姐 is not concentrating on her work I should use 姐姐一边写字，一边吃水果。

Thanks much.

[Nebbermind]

SAHM_TAN:

Hi,


Just to clarify again to make sure I understand. If I'm unhappy that 姐姐 is not concentrating on her work I should use 姐姐一边写字，一边吃水果。

Thanks much.

I believe there is no hard and fast rules as to how to apply it.

Eg.

我一边冲凉， 一边唱歌。

It's not like it's wrong to sing in the bath.

But 我一边唱歌, 一边冲凉certain doesn't sound too right.

Correct me if I'm wrong.

[lnjason888]

嗯

[Nebbermind]

lnjason888:

嗯

I can't find a translation for this.

[lnjason888]

哈哈