2010 PSLE English
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Pen88n:
Maybe \"drill\" too hard and late nights before the exams? Either very confident can do well, or so \"bo chap\" that can't be bothered to do well....[/quote]Deleted.livewith_vanilla:
[quote=\"snowman.697\"]One more thing, flametree, its abt u n ur friends.
>livewith vanilla: I try very hard to make realistic compos, often recounting frm docmentaries (read: non fiction), my own exp etc.. and i use real street names and real landmarks. I also try to include a bit of violence just to add to the climax and make my story more thrilling = more content marks, but i dont go to the point where a bunch of people storm a 777 and tell the pilot to crash into wsss's changi tower, that's far too much... -
I am not a teacher but I believe the norm is to write a realistic compo with a moral in mind. Just look at the compreh passages in assessment books and sch practice papers. If one can pepper the content with some humour, all the better.
Anyway, the paper is already taken. No pt worrying abt out of point or not.
Be focus for the other papers. All the best to all. -
livewith_vanilla:
I wrote a simple compo. I didn't want to go out of topic. Went OT for Prelim CL and that was the end of me writing too long compos.
Easy, but ended up writing 8 pages for some reason. I tried not to include too much grotesquity(?) though... i do not want faint hearted examiners to faint lolsnowman.697:
[quote=\"livewith_vanilla\"]Hello hello!
:shock: :shock: Why you guys the compo so violent de?
Mine more \"siwen\".
Mine is about the old lady fainting. I said at the end of the compo is because she fell and hit her head on the shelf at a supermarket earlier that day.
Ok right? :?
The english paper was easier than my school exam paper but was tricky.
Snowman, how was your paper?
Good luck for your maths!
I'm still reeling(?) in from shock reading what the others have wrote... so daring...[/quote]
My DD wrote a very simple one also. She wrote that the old lady fainted due to heat. when the ambulance came, they pronounced her dead..???...anyway, she used to write very long, dramatic stories but I advised her not to. Scare out of point. -
livewith_vanilla:
Grandma come stab you Then enemy stab you?
I write the grandma came towards me. She stab me. Then my enemy save me. Of course gt more description lah.the kiasu student:
[quote=\"looneytunezz\"]Ok lah, synthesis easy, grammar also easy but vocab a bit tricky. Compo also a bit tricky like hard to write
What topic you chose to write?
Synthesis no indirect speech! Soo wasted!
Er.. did you seriously write this for PSLE?beauty queen:
You seriously wrote this??my was she was chased by loan shark syndicate group and the extreme suns heat made her dehydrated and parched cauing her to walk unsteadily. I try stop that gy go stab my back and also my friends and slah old lady throat. I wake up smelling a familiar scent look around but was total darkness. Hear my mother sobbing. Ask her waht happen to friends. They die, and i lose my eyesight due to a hitting somewhere in the backbone which causes eyesight to be lost(got read somewheree before) then say i will think my own eyes will return if justice is served.
Described it using alot of phrases. If this ok.....?
You are sure daring.
A bit out of point, not realistic le! :shock:
You get stabbed in the back, see your friends get stabbed and old lady throat slashed, then you faint?
Then your friends die just because they get stabbed?!
:!:[/quote]
after they die i faint. Who say ppl dont die when gotten stabbed especially in the back... -
beauty queen:
I'm amused by how you kids recount your compositions. I hope the language you used in the posts are not indicative of the language you used in your compos. :lol:my was she was chased by loan shark syndicate group and the extreme suns heat made her dehydrated and parched cauing her to walk unsteadily. I try stop that gy go stab my back and also my friends and slah old lady throat. I wake up smelling a familiar scent look around but was total darkness. Hear my mother sobbing. Ask her waht happen to friends. They die, and i lose my eyesight due to a hitting somewhere in the backbone which causes eyesight to be lost(got read somewheree before) then say i will think my own eyes will return if justice is served.
Described it using alot of phrases. If this ok.....? -
jtoh:
Dehydration causes unsteady walking? -.-
I'm amused by how you kids recount your compositions. I hope the language you used in the posts are not indicative of the language you used in your compos. :lol:beauty queen:
my was she was chased by loan shark syndicate group and the extreme suns heat made her dehydrated and parched cauing her to walk unsteadily. I try stop that gy go stab my back and also my friends and slah old lady throat. I wake up smelling a familiar scent look around but was total darkness. Hear my mother sobbing. Ask her waht happen to friends. They die, and i lose my eyesight due to a hitting somewhere in the backbone which causes eyesight to be lost(got read somewheree before) then say i will think my own eyes will return if justice is served.
Described it using alot of phrases. If this ok.....? -
jtoh:
I'm amused by how you kids recount your compositions. I hope the language you used in the posts are not indicative of the language you used in your compos. :lol:beauty queen:
my was she was chased by loan shark syndicate group and the extreme suns heat made her dehydrated and parched cauing her to walk unsteadily. I try stop that gy go stab my back and also my friends and slah old lady throat. I wake up smelling a familiar scent look around but was total darkness. Hear my mother sobbing. Ask her waht happen to friends. They die, and i lose my eyesight due to a hitting somewhere in the backbone which causes eyesight to be lost(got read somewheree before) then say i will think my own eyes will return if justice is served.
Described it using alot of phrases. If this ok.....?
It is not like that madam/sir jtoh -
beauty queen:
I'm amused by how you kids recount your compositions. I hope the language you used in the posts are not indicative of the language you used in your compos. :lol:jtoh:
[quote=\"beauty queen\"]my was she was chased by loan shark syndicate group and the extreme suns heat made her dehydrated and parched cauing her to walk unsteadily. I try stop that gy go stab my back and also my friends and slah old lady throat. I wake up smelling a familiar scent look around but was total darkness. Hear my mother sobbing. Ask her waht happen to friends. They die, and i lose my eyesight due to a hitting somewhere in the backbone which causes eyesight to be lost(got read somewheree before) then say i will think my own eyes will return if justice is served.
Described it using alot of phrases. If this ok.....?
It is not like that madam/sir jtoh[/quote] :lol: Good luck in your PSLE! -
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