All About English Creative Writing

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Herbie:

Hi TAS, I hv the following qn.

the boy took some money fr the drawer. His mother walked in.
ans: No soomer had the boy taken some money from the drawer, his mother walked in.

my cousin and __ went swimming at the Wild Park.
ans is me or I
please advise. Tx

Hi Herbie,

QN1:

For 'No sooner', it must be followed by 'than' and
there is no comma in the sentence.

'No sooner' is used to compare 2 instances, hence 'than' is used.

Answer should be:

No sooner had the boy taken some money from the drawer
than his mother walked in.

If 'scarely' is used, it would go with 'when'

Example:

The boy had scarcely taken some money from
the drawer when his mother walked in.

QN2:

For the second question, the answer is 'I'

- 'I' is used when it is used as a subject- the person does
the action

Eg:

My father and I went running. ('I' - doing the action of running)

-'me' is used when it is used as an object- the person does
not do the action

Eg:

My father brought my brother and me to the park('me' receives
the action of the father's bringing and does not do the action of 'bringing' himself)

TAS

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jeestan:

HI TAS,


Thanks for your input on writing for my child. It gives me a lot of ideas now. If there is a need to pre-order your writing book, I would like to put in my order.

Hi jeestan,

Sure you can preorder the book, just email us your name and phone number.

TAS

[littlewoman]

The Alternative Story:

jeestan:

HI TAS,


Thanks for your input on writing for my child. It gives me a lot of ideas now. If there is a need to pre-order your writing book, I would like to put in my order.

Hi jeestan,

Sure you can preorder the book, just email us your name and phone number.

TAS

Hi TAS,

Could I order too? What is the title of the book?

[ck123]

Hi TAS


I would like to order the book too.

Thanks

[smurfette3]

Hi TAS,


Me too, I want to get the book!

[coolit]

Hi TAS,


If my child is already at your centre, do we need to pre-order? Or would
you set aside some books for us to get?

[jeestan]

The Alternative Story:

jeestan:

HI TAS,


Thanks for your input on writing for my child. It gives me a lot of ideas now. If there is a need to pre-order your writing book, I would like to put in my order.

Hi jeestan,

Sure you can preorder the book, just email us your name and phone number.

TAS

Thanks TAS, I have sent you an email regarding my order.

[isabella.026990zola]

Hi TAS,


This book is suitable for which age group? Can preschoolers do it?

[MLJ]

The Alternative Story:

Hi MLJ,

It is suitable for high ability Pri 1 and 2s and for Pri 3 all the way to Pri 6.
For the first round, we may not be printing that many books so you
can pre-order with us first if you are want to get it within these
few weeks.

TAS

Hi TAS,

Ok thanks, I have emailed you my order. We can pick it from any of your branches right?

[ksfaith]

Hi


I would like to order the creative writing book too.

At the same time, i would like to know for bukit timah branch is there any other slot P4. Cause my girl is in afternoon session next year. Is there any week end class?