2010 PSLE English
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Why the content of the compo u kids wrote like a bit too violent?
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Jennifer:
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Jennifer:
Why the content of the compo u kids wrote like a bit too violent?
Yes, a lot of dying and killing :? -
flametree:
What? out of point!i chose number 3 for compo. i wrote that the granny sat besides at bus stop. boarded bus tog. bus was jam packed but i got a seat but refused to let granny sit coz i was dead tired. suddenly bus jammed brake and she lost her grip and flew out of the bus's windscreen and died on the road. i became a \"murderer\".
flametree DS -
beauty queen:
I wrote 'The fact that he did not keep his promise upset me' alsolooneytunezz:
[quote=\"MOE Hater\"]for 2nd synthesis.
He did not keep his promise. It upset me.
The fact that he did not keep his promise made me upset.
Is it correct?
same here! Think my compo quite logical??????[/quote]Not sure..it seems ok I also dont dare to say but I wrote about kidnap, that the lady told me my parents had an accident and she was also injured as she was in their car and they wanted to ask her to bring me to the hospital then she and some men kidnap me..I scared mine out of point. -
snowman.697:
I also think so leh, I think this topic quite a number of people can easily go out of point
What? out of point!flametree:
i chose number 3 for compo. i wrote that the granny sat besides at bus stop. boarded bus tog. bus was jam packed but i got a seat but refused to let granny sit coz i was dead tired. suddenly bus jammed brake and she lost her grip and flew out of the bus's windscreen and died on the road. i became a \"murderer\".
flametree DS
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flametree:
What? out of point!i chose number 3 for compo. i wrote that the granny sat besides at bus stop. boarded bus tog. bus was jam packed but i got a seat but refused to let granny sit coz i was dead tired. suddenly bus jammed brake and she lost her grip and flew out of the bus's windscreen and died on the road. i became a \"murderer\".
flametree DS -
Hello hello!
:shock: :shock: Why you guys the compo so violent de?
Mine more \"siwen\".
Mine is about the old lady fainting. I said at the end of the compo is because she fell and hit her head on the shelf at a supermarket earlier that day.
Ok right? :?
The english paper was easier than my school exam paper but was tricky.
Snowman, how was your paper?
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the kiasu student:
Grandma come stab you Then enemy stab you?
I write the grandma came towards me. She stab me. Then my enemy save me. Of course gt more description lah.looneytunezz:
Ok lah, synthesis easy, grammar also easy but vocab a bit tricky. Compo also a bit tricky like hard to write
What topic you chose to write?
Synthesis no indirect speech! Soo wasted!
Er.. did you seriously write this for PSLE?beauty queen:
You seriously wrote this??my was she was chased by loan shark syndicate group and the extreme suns heat made her dehydrated and parched cauing her to walk unsteadily. I try stop that gy go stab my back and also my friends and slah old lady throat. I wake up smelling a familiar scent look around but was total darkness. Hear my mother sobbing. Ask her waht happen to friends. They die, and i lose my eyesight due to a hitting somewhere in the backbone which causes eyesight to be lost(got read somewheree before) then say i will think my own eyes will return if justice is served.
Described it using alot of phrases. If this ok.....?
You are sure daring.
A bit out of point, not realistic le! :shock:
You get stabbed in the back, see your friends get stabbed and old lady throat slashed, then you faint?
Then your friends die just because they get stabbed?!
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snowman.697:
Totally out le.
What? out of point!flametree:
i chose number 3 for compo. i wrote that the granny sat besides at bus stop. boarded bus tog. bus was jam packed but i got a seat but refused to let granny sit coz i was dead tired. suddenly bus jammed brake and she lost her grip and flew out of the bus's windscreen and died on the road. i became a \"murderer\".
flametree DS
The question say that you and your friends were at the bus stop when you noticed an elderly woman was walking unsteadily towards you.
Not the granny sit beside you.
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